ok so no one has critiqued yet so IIIII will!!!! hey Shilly ya retard! Johnny's foot looks freaking like it got hit with a sledge! and wheres the skin color!?

also your coloring sucks! so what if you had to use only outline pens because you happened to be in math! (>>::: and i wonder why math is my only bad grade....)

yeah!.... anyone notice the blue on here is like the same color as Johnny The Homicidal Maniac book cover? i didn't till it was posted


lastly! whats up with the back ground!? out the sad excuse for a window? what happened to coloring the roofs and IDK the moon!?

simple answers to these questions! D I was lazy! and have no photoshooooep on this crappy 2001 comuter <3 and again too lazy to carry art supplies to anywhere really.......


ok... I'm gonna go do homework... meaning I'm gonna go try to balance pencils till my cat distracts me and I eventually remember in 1st period..... when its due


god I'm bored..............

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I love this picture but edgar's left foot (our right) is weird. It's like...leg...leg...FOOT! HAH, caughtcha by suprise didn't I?! -_- I'd like more shading there. And as a side note, johnny's right arm (our left) is freaking me out. O.o

I hope you weren't too angry at 19. 20 helped out, yes?

I think the main crit I have for this is that the body shapes aren't fleshed out underneath the clothes. The clothes look like they're hanging loose, but since the bodies in the clothes aren't defined, either by shading or lines, the bodies themselves look a bit wiggly. Johnny's torso in particular.

I totally love Johnny's eyes, though. And Edgar's face entirely. He looks so satisfied.

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thank you! I really appreciate getting crit. every once in a while, And I do have trouble with skinny in baggy, I need to work on that.

yeah haha I was really sad at 19 but 20 was a great improvement! 19 even got my friend to write her own so I'm pleased over all.

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"I have a very sexy learning disability.... and what do I call it? "
"...........Sexlexia."

Oh, CUTE.

Way.....Too Cute!!

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haha,thank you ^^ And thank you for the favs also!

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